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Tears and Shotguns

Mon Nov 9, 2009, 12:24 PM
  • Mood: Amused
  • Listening to: Rush
  • Reading: Foley is Good by Mick Foley
  • Watching: Venture Brothers
  • Playing: Soul Calibur IV and BG2
  • Eating: Baby Cow smothered in cheese
  • Drinking: Tea
Okay so I've been having trouble for a while now. Mostly life issues that have prevented me from finding good inspiration for my story. However that time has passed and I am re-energized and aching to write again. So very soon we will be seeing an update to NEHC. The next chapter is: NEHC Chapter 14 War of the Heart. And I have a bit of a preview for one of the upcoming chapters, just to show that I have actually been working on SOMETHING. This is a brief tease from the chapter "The Mettle of a Knight" which is Chapter 17:

His arm came down fast, trailing black smoke as it did. Kemp quickly grabbed Alana and tried to use his body to shield her from the strike, though his instincts told him that a weapon like Paradis would simply pass through them both. Kemp felt Alana's arms tighten and felt her heart racing as the blow continued to fall.

However... it never landed.

"What the hell?!" Paradis said, confused by what stood before him.

The long dark hair that covered the man's face was blowing faintly in the wind. The fingers, like those of spider legs, were holding the smoking sword as blood trickled down the arm from his faintly glowing palm. The man was panting as he stood there. "I'm sorry... it took me so long... to get here" he said in between breathes.

Kemp looked up at the sight and let out a chuckle. He managed to get up from the ground and took a stance. He began to spark with red arcs of energy. "Raudur Eldring" he said in a very calm manner as he pushed his hand forward, allowing the arcs of red lightning to erupt towards the three knights. Balthazaar and Elizabeth lept to either side of the room while Nick took the brunt of the attack. He managed to turn much of it around him and out the huge palisade window behind him. The window shattered into thousands of pieces and as the knight landed a curtain of powered and melted glass slowly drifted down like a soft snow fall. He huffed a bit but was unharmed save for a blackened bit on his left cheek where some of the electricity had arced.

So... the boy had some power left after all. Balthazaar thought to himself. "Paradis!" Balthazaar yelled as the other knight quickly turned towards him. "I'll deal with Kemp... You know what to do" he said.

Paradis nodded and took an offensive stance with his shadowy blade. "Who the hell are you?"

A voice very quietly came from the other man.

"What did you just say?" Paradis asked, loosening his stance a bit... unsure of what was about to happen.

After a moment the voice rose. "I said... You're not being very nice to my friends" The man's head suddenly turned up, his face was grim and his eyes wild. "Don't hurt them anymore!" he shrieked in defiance.

SO there is that for all of you... Also i will be re-doing this story at some point with the names altered for the most part. I just want to remind everyone who is written about in the story: I REALLY DON'T HATE ANY OF YOU! Like seriously! You are in it because I find you to be an interesting character to write about and a character that can work within the context of the story. Obviously Nick isn't actually like this and Lord knows Conroy isn't ANYTHING like this, now one of his characters in a Vick and Kyle game was but that's besides the point. So No one take offense to this and even if you do... well I don't care much.

In other news, the Shotguns part of this post, I am also starting work on something else. No magical powers this time, well maybe some mysticm but nothing major like in previous works of mine. This one is more of a Shadowrun-esque setting, however the Corporations don't own everything... the Federal Government does in the name of Equality and socialism. The story is going to be kept under wraps, as I want the premise to be kept quiet for now until it is actually released, but once it is I hope you will all enjoy it. It's a very bleak view of the future if trends in Washington continue. The world may not be our own but aspects of it inspire aspects of this world and it is going to be a view of the world under extreme Liberalism, as Extreme Conservatism is so cliched now that its boring. Look for that soon as well.

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  • Current Residence: Maine
  • Interests: Anime, Writing, Poetry, Politics, Drawing, and charming the lovely young ladies
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:iconmizteriengel:
*Waiting impatiently for next NEHC chapter* :bored:

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~I could write it better than you ever felt it~

Thanks to *Princekarr for my avatar. :-)
:iconnckemp756:
Tis up m'lady

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"You don't have to understand a woman, all you have to do is love her"

" Those who say that we're in a time when there are no heros, they just don't know where to look." - Ronald Reagan
:iconmizteriengel:
I saw; I will read it as soon as I can.

I have a favor to ask of you (and Deul but I will contact him seperately). Would you be interested in coming by my apartment sometime Thursday and/or Friday and helping me pack? I'm all by myself and there is practically no one around campus right now. You and Deul are the only ones really around I would like to spend some time with. It's just that I have to have it all packed by Saturday and I have been working 10pm-6am since Monday (last shift is tonight) so my days have been spent sleeping. Last week was in Lewiston job and apartment searching. Just message me back on here or Facebook cause my phone is shut off due to unpaid bills. But yeah. :-( Please? :please:

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~I could write it better than you ever felt it~

Thanks to *Princekarr for my avatar. :-)
:iconnckemp756:
I'll try my best... I would have today but before I got your message I had agreed to work... and than by the time I knew I didn't have too It was already too late. I'm really not feeling all that well right now and probably won't be able to help... I will try my best but Its only 10 and I'm going to bed because I don't feel well... I was fine earlier today but about 3 hours ago shit just came on. I'll do my best though.

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"You don't have to understand a woman, all you have to do is love her"

" Those who say that we're in a time when there are no heros, they just don't know where to look." - Ronald Reagan
:iconmizteriengel:
I hope you feel better hun. :hug: I will miss you :-( If you want, I need help tomorrow morning around 9ish to pack my cousin's truck up. Norm is helping me. If you are feeling better I would love your help too. I need a Kemp hug :glomp:

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~I could write it better than you ever felt it~

Thanks to *Princekarr for my avatar. :-)
:iconsquirrelly88:
double YAY its kemp :)

you just gained xp in cuddleland :) lol

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"It's better to be hated for who you are, than to be loved for who you are not"

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